Saturday, February 21, 2009

Forever And All Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had a dream the other day
That I walked along a road,
And came upon a man who worked
At a place where water flowed.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Darla Holt 26 July 2009

Once again you've written a wonderful poem with excellent rhythm and rhyme. I was captivated from beginning to end.

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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

this is such a magnificent tale. I absolutely loved it. such great imagery and flowed so nicely.

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Malini Kadir 02 March 2009

Very inspirational.... I read it twice to comprehend its full essence...loved it Sir....my respect for you as poet has gone up notches with this work of yours.....Superb! Sir JUST SUPERB!

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Icepath of Thunderclan 26 February 2009

I love this poem wolfey your a really good writter and I really love your work.

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~ Jon London ~ 26 February 2009

The master of poetic verse writes again the true meaning behind a poets beautiful voice, i adore your ability to create such wonderful visions in so many line.10 from me wolfy my friend Jon

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alex waters 24 February 2009

this poem was wonderful, i must say, perhaps the best i have read all day. i felt chills when i read this, most inspiring, a 10 and a favorite indeed.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 February 2009

Sir, This poem is mystical and mysterious, the way most of the ancient scriptures were written. I think on one thing. The one in wait and the one to come are the same.It will be only resurgence no taking charge........there is only one at the beginning in the middle and at the end..................

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Ency Bearis 23 February 2009

some dream comes true... if you believe in miracle and have faith on God.. with the poem you implied sacrifice and the dream might come true.. nice provoking write...10

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Emancipation Planz 22 February 2009

tis left me wondering... What would Jesus have done? ...: ~) Personally I'd want 2 planks.. that way I could make my own cross easier rather than having to carpenter up one to get two.. that asides.. tis a great poem Wolfey...

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Naidz Ladia 21 February 2009

dear greeney, , , i like the title best.... upon reading the context, the more i like it all for it expresses words for soul forever at all times... so now, i'd rather say even if i read your long poem it doesn't waste my time coz i read words of wisdom from others, i could not find... so always remember dear greeney we have different ways in our journey i'll follow what our KORAN says i'llalways remember your words for me... these words in your poem is not only for you tho you made this and authored by you but you posted ths for your friends so i include my self as a subject here in...... hope this words of mine eases your day coz seems today is not like yesterday hope it brings you a happy smile i lav ya dear, , , nvite me again next time, , , , , ,

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Duh Huh 21 February 2009

Oh what a beautiful land to aspire to, you took me there with such passion, i want to go there and lay some planks myself. :)

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perfect in every way. I am amazed at how effectively you maintained the flow in such in long piece.

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Fiona Davidson 21 February 2009

Excellent read here....lovely dream to have....thank you...10+++

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Cathryn Adeli 21 February 2009

easy read, i enjoyed it. keep on dreaming, as they say you must have a dream to have a dream come true. thanks

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Laurie Hill 21 February 2009

A mesmorising write. An excellent story captivating one's imagination. Wonderful 10+++++

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