Sunday, March 10, 2019

Forever And A Day...... Comments

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There's nothing I don't do, without
thinking of you. Washing a dish or
two. Hear the sound of the kettle's
whistle too. While we had such soapy
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Rebecca Navarre
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2019

And all the love behind each one still today.......impressive ending. Beautiful poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 02 April 2019

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such a very beautiful and kind reply! .. God bless! ..

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 March 2019

day and night here leaving its time with the memories of you o' the you on the living leaf of souvenir...../// beautiful expression

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2019

Thank you! .. Mahtab, For such a beautiful and thoughtful reply! .. God bless! ..

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 March 2019

Hi Becca, Intriguing write. The opening line really tested my language skills, if I had any: “There is nothing I don’t do, without Thinking of you...” You have used three negatives in this sentence, namely “nothing”, “don’t “ and “without “... So, the ultimate result is a negative statement!

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Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2019

:) Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, Your reply and kindness is appreciated! .. heh, guess that is something i need to study more on... those have always been confusing and don't make much sense to me... alittle backwards i guess. :) Ever so many blessings! ..

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