Forever And A Day...... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Forever And A Day......

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There's nothing I don't do, without
thinking of you. Washing a dish or
two. Hear the sound of the kettle's
whistle too. While we had such soapy
fun, outside getting them done. Fried
chickens the best, no contest. To every
one this was proved. Talk about frogs
and whittle away. Trying to keep time
at bay. Pick a blade of grass and play,
a melody that'd, make everything okay.
Watch the sky move, and the flowers
sway. Everything, so precious in it's
own way. And the all heart carebear
that you made. Hold tight. All the
prayers that you taught me to pray. And
all the love behind each one still today.

Sunday, March 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,gratitude,loving ,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2019

And all the love behind each one still today.......impressive ending. Beautiful poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 02 April 2019

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such a very beautiful and kind reply! .. God bless! ..

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 March 2019

day and night here leaving its time with the memories of you o' the you on the living leaf of souvenir...../// beautiful expression

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2019

Thank you! .. Mahtab, For such a beautiful and thoughtful reply! .. God bless! ..

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 March 2019

Hi Becca, Intriguing write. The opening line really tested my language skills, if I had any: “There is nothing I don’t do, without Thinking of you...” You have used three negatives in this sentence, namely “nothing”, “don’t “ and “without “... So, the ultimate result is a negative statement!

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Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2019

:) Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, Your reply and kindness is appreciated! .. heh, guess that is something i need to study more on... those have always been confusing and don't make much sense to me... alittle backwards i guess. :) Ever so many blessings! ..

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