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Forever Abyss Comments
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the darkness of my soul
pierces the moonlit sky
isit in the black
salt water coming from my eye
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Allemagne Roßmann
30 August 2011
together blood cover s the sky clouds weep until the end of time i sit in the black saltwater coming from my eye alone in the darkness forever abyss i like this part specially. Superb flow of words and spectacular write.Well done.Amazing.
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7/26/2025 6:20:18 PM # 1.0.0
'Saltwater coming from my eye.' I love this line, there are so many interpretations to be made. Beautiful metaphor, beautiful writing.