Monday, October 8, 2018

Forever A Wanderer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seems wandering into a forest
Of wild souls with suppurating claws
Life has become a rotten leaf
Swept away by treacherous gale
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 October 2018

its good but you must try and take charge of your life rogues abound everywhere and only you can for yourself care guard yourself a voice always tell me make a wise decision no one else will lose if you let ego overrule be thoughtful life has many hurdles and you alone must row your boat don't let anyone else fiddle not even this silly poet interfering no not really trying to voice my own experiences in this vast valley full of bigotry

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 October 2018

That is a beautiful review of this poem. My heartfelt gratitude.

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