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City lights reflected by silver clouds
My brand new shoes on the dark, dusty pavement
Following the golden glow down the avenue
High trees, white walls and luxury villas
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A beautiful love poem julie I enjoyed it Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
The reader is drawn along through the lobby, down the hall, into the door. Mesmerized. Do we want to know what is behind that door? Should we go any further? What will the future be like if the consequences are damned? Intriguing and compelling piece, Julie. Nicely done! :)
I like this poem. I am compelled to say, you deserve better when the betrayal is revealed. Good poem. Thanks for writing it.
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7/25/2025 12:04:05 AM # 1.0.0
Betrayal! ! Facing life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.