Forever is but a concept
That exists in our own minds
Like railway tracks going off
To infinity, to a finite dot.
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We imagine a lot of things in this life when we cannot figure it out. Forever is one of them. I enjoy this open. And well written. Mohabeer Beeharry
Great way of opening the concept of Forever and with an alluring conclusion of the same. Wonderful read. Voted 10/10
Forever and the ever before, ever before if not to us but forever is not it may be eternity or till the time we breathe..it depends upon the magnification power of the mind its womb and tomb both is mind that's why poet says Forever is but a concept, That exists in our own minds again on concluding Tomorrow lasts forever. in this if one dies today than tomorrow last fore ever..........thank u Mr. David love your work and love to read fantastic work
Forever is our breaths.. because when we died it gone and it be forever while the body alive, when we die we forget about what is forever...because we arent forever_Soul
Beautiful poem... Forever is long lasting.. no end for it....Loved reading it..
Forever is a time span that we Cannot imagine; like eternity, Never ending. Something Beyond our comprehension. beautiful lines. eternity can not b imagined.
forever is forever and ever never ending. everlasting. well written a good read
Forever, is a long time in my mind. A great poem and a good question.
Forever is all the time left in the moment. Great interpretation reflecting reality. Poem of great beauty and flow.
A good detailing about the confusion of for ever in our mind.... well thought