Sunday, September 24, 2006

Forever. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes we say forever, when really we mean now,
But things can change, things can change, things can cange and how.

Passionate words are spoken, we mean them there and then,
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Patricia Gale 20 November 2006

Words that ring so true, nice flow, awesome piece

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Tori Ocean 24 September 2006

were i you, i'd take out all your contractions and replace them with the original words(we'll = we will) . it would improve the rhythm alot. and u misspelled feelings in the last stanza. the poem has a wonderfull flow to it, and it's all truth you speak. I'm sure it would sound great read aloud. awesome.

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