Sometimes we say forever, when really we mean now,
But things can change, things can change, things can cange and how.
Passionate words are spoken, we mean them there and then,
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were i you, i'd take out all your contractions and replace them with the original words(we'll = we will) . it would improve the rhythm alot. and u misspelled feelings in the last stanza. the poem has a wonderfull flow to it, and it's all truth you speak. I'm sure it would sound great read aloud. awesome.
Words that ring so true, nice flow, awesome piece