Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Forever Comments

Rating: 2.7

No matter how many
Times sorry comes out
Of your mouth your
Never fully forgiven
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Michaella Jones
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Brandon Owens 07 May 2010

I really like the last verse, it's a nice ending and sums up the expression of the rest of the poem. I read other of your poems and I enjoyed reading them, but you have a tendency to rush it seems. Try proofreading and fixing errors. You're instead of your, and other common mistakes. I make them too, but they help the feel and flow of the poem if you get rid of the mistakes.

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