Forever Comments

Nice and simple...straight to the point Liked it..... U \m/

love feelings nicely brought out...frank and honest good couplet...10

it's telling something; that you will be gone if he didn't love you for you only in two lines like two demonstrative sentences...and this is completely contradicted with the concept of a poem...but it is good as a verse...i liked it so keep writing..

Puts things in perspective well.