Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forget all these material things

they mean nothing to me
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Cheri Michelle
COMMENTS

Eternal Love. So powerful. Enjoyed the read. well written.

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Nikunj Sharma 23 November 2009

it almost seems like a love prayer...true, pristine as the first snow on the mountain peaks...swift as a free flowing river....good write..sonya

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Siddharth Singh 23 November 2009

Forever is a long time time but it happens to be the often repeated promise among lovers. You have succeeded in creating a very nice poem with it.

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Shelly Shelly 20 November 2009

and I promise you this If you will stand by me I will stay by you and I will love you Forever. very nicely written..deep feelings..keep it up

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