Forget all these material things
they mean nothing to me
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it almost seems like a love prayer...true, pristine as the first snow on the mountain peaks...swift as a free flowing river....good write..sonya
Forever is a long time time but it happens to be the often repeated promise among lovers. You have succeeded in creating a very nice poem with it.
and I promise you this If you will stand by me I will stay by you and I will love you Forever. very nicely written..deep feelings..keep it up
Eternal Love. So powerful. Enjoyed the read. well written.