Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart and hope is within thee
For the end of time
Till mere words fade and poet’s have no rhyme
Forever shall it be
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Patricia Gale
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As you say another place in time and I love the old fashioned words. What a beautiful love poem this is. Thanks for this lovely piece of work. 10 Karin Anderson

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I agree entirely with Chris, and how lucky also to feel such love...... t x

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Kris Smith 26 November 2008

Patricia just pure beauty in verse this is some very lucky man to be the recipitant of this piece of work 10 +++++ chris romance lives x

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Joseph Poewhit 26 November 2008

Has a depth of love expressed nicely

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it rhymed very well.. Nice beat to it.. Dan

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