Monday, February 23, 2009

Forests Of Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see her, by the lamplight; waiting,
I watch her from the shadows, so dark,
Her hair; ruffled by the soft autumn breeze,
Shining; as gold in the forests of autumn,
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Laurie hill
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 08 June 2009

Heart rendering sadness, a tribute cloaked softly in love, awesome Laurie. A very emotional write with excellent imagery.

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Saadat Tahir 24 April 2009

My tears are touched......and dried, By the wind; from the forests of autumn. great lines... last but not the least nice style and content cheers

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Sonya Florentino 11 April 2009

oh wow, this is a forest teeming with spirits, ... i especially like the sound of the last 5 lines....

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This poem drew me in to pure magic. The words, so mystical, so descriptive, I feel I am there next to you. Your talent is truly amazing...... Karin Anderson

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Duh Huh 24 February 2009

Wow, this was heart rendering in its sadness and heartwarming with its ethereal presence, as i felt a haunting softness to it. Again i am in awe of your expressive talent. Thank you.

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Tia Maria 23 February 2009

A tribute to a beautiful love. A sensitive & heartfelt write.10/10 with much love & respect, T

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