Wednesday, August 23, 2006

Forest Sprite Ii Comments

Rating: 3.2

Wandering down the wooded path,
A sparkle 'neath a tree
Captures my attention -
A forest sprite I see;
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Linda Ori
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Very enchanting! ! ! ! another ten! ! ! !

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David Harris 03 April 2007

Linda, I wish I could come across that sprite so she could grant a wish for me. Another very enchanting poem. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Alison Cassidy 26 August 2006

After reading your first Forest Sprite, I was delighted to see that you had written another - this one is just as enchanting and fantastical as the first, full of childlike wonder and optimism. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Danny Reynolds 24 August 2006

; ¬) Danny

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Tranquil Ocean 23 August 2006

Enchanting! ! ! ! ! Mesmerizing...Lovely visuals...I can picture them perfect! Thanks so much for sharing....

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 August 2006

'Tis time for a series, midnight....I want to see it...you can do it....it'll ROCK! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Tailor Bell 23 August 2006

a sequel to be reckoned with and right fine pair of fairy verses. these ARE enchanting. splendid works. -Tailor

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And there was me thinking that Forest Sprite I couldn't be bettered.... L, this is utterly enchanting and magical, and exquisitely written. A fairytale for children or an inspired spark of hope for adults? 'Tis both. t x

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