Forest Of Love Trees Comments

(cont.) ....the 'story' got more optimistic due to the author's dreaming! :) i hope your 'dream' comes true, Akhtar. to MyPoemList. and perhaps a showcase? ? maybe August's? ? bri :)

i am enjoying the story-telling so far, but NOT the 'story'. : ( here: and my nerves when carry the signals i'll suggest a reordering: and when my nerves carry the signals developing in the trees of love, ...how about: developing into the trees of love. [note a period, not a comma, after 'love'.] Hey! they are ONLY suggestions! ! ha ha. (cont.) ....

Plant the trees of love and as you wish, create a forest of love where everyone can relax as under a beautiful arbor! Beautiful write!

The saddest thing that plagues humanity are BAD emotions - hatred, jealousy, greed, etc. I don't really know how people hate on others, it is so hard to hold on to such horrible thoughts. A very beautiful, mesmerising write Mr Jawad. Have a wonderful day sir: -)

stupendous.....greatly writings The embryos came out of the womb of my heart... Yeah and this heart is ONE from ONENESS- omnipotent MAGNET everyone and everything came and scattered into thousands pieces everyone and everything may be together one-day by gravitational power or roots of tree of love will touch everyone and everything

A powerful poem on humanity and brotherhood. Very perceptive write that echoes unity. Brilliantly penned.10+++++and onto my Poem List.

BUT U SIR can GIVE BIRTH TO SUCH A FOREST OF LOVE......typo ]]]]]]]this site has no way to edit immediately

I see it's the same sun, the same moon and the same stars and it's the same mountains, the same rivers and the same seas. The embryos came out of the womb of my heart and are developing in the trees of love, I may not, but my descendants may see a forest of such love trees. EXCELLENT PAR EXCELLENT WHO ELSE BUT U SIR GIVE BIRTH TO SUCH A FOREST OF LOVE onn this earth

I hope the same for all our descendants.

The world has to learn the lessons of brotherhood and understanding.