Wednesday, September 29, 2010

(((Forest Bedroom))) Comments

Rating: 4.9

Secure in your heated arms...
Protected from Falls plantiff chill...
Aglow in the pleasure of your face--
Flushed as the burnished leaves upon Autumns hill;
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Jim Cunningham 29 September 2010

this is well done-effective wording, imagery, good symmetry and a surprising last line-yes, well done

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