Sunday, November 20, 2011

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One simple embrace,
The softess carress,
Bodies fall into a feverant pool of lust,
touched within, my body is yours,
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Crimson Love
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Dougie Darko 22 November 2011

Very Nicely written poem, with very nice emotion!

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Bella Hernandez 20 November 2011

such... personal and lustful poem Crimson! but still as lovely as any poem you made! 'The burning of souls as bodies collide, gentle pushes.....soft tugs of hair, Tongues dance, as time is forgotten, We've always been here.' wonderful, lustful lines that truly are pleasent ~Bella

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