Thursday, November 23, 2017

Foreign War Comments

Rating: 4.6

She looks out the window.
Waiting for her husband who is her one true love.
The snow is falling lightly.
And the stars are shining above.
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Lamar Cole
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Rini Shibu 23 November 2017

Love strengthens heart far or near, when someone is waiting, desire to reach out to them is more Beautiful poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Quite a delicate poem of deep love dear Lamar.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 November 2017

He walks through the door/He has just returned from fighting in a foreign war/But he always carried her love in his heart/Whether near or far….This little write intensely expresses the sublime love that pumps the cardiac cycle of the brave warier! So powerfully and elegantly sketched through precise diction…Loved the way love is expressed! Many congratulations dear poet! !

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