Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Forces Of The Earth Comments

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Forces of the earth
beyond our control
we can only wait and see
what each rotation will bring
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Dave Alan Walker
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Dee Corpolongo 12 November 2012

...and oh, how very true this is! Excellent thought said in this poem. Thank you.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 12 November 2012

None can control the Earth-Well said.

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Hans Vr 11 November 2012

This is a great truth very poetically expressed. Well written

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Payal Parande 07 November 2012

true to the core but would have been meaningless if it wasn't brilliantly expressed by a brilliant poet...... thank you for sharing love payal

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Expressed with pure reality, Sir Dave, Its always a pleasure reading one of your short poems, ...quickly reaches my mind The_African_Son

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Jac Harper 01 November 2012

Succinct truth expressed poetically.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 November 2012

We can't control the earth! well said!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 November 2012

Dear sir, you have very rightly surmised the psychosis of common man after witnessing devastating effects of Sandy a nature's wrath. True we can not control the effects of the rotation of earth but if we decide we can reduce the damage by preserving the ecological balance n respecting the nature. I invite u to read my epic of life-26 in particular and other episodes on the theme highlighting man's tug of war with nature n it's impact.

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Valerie Dohren 31 October 2012

We cannot control it but we can certainly damage it - nice one Dave

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