Friday, January 22, 2010

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He never really
left me
although I did escape
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kesi miwa
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Juvela Obi 30 March 2010

Very similar to 'Loudest in the Silence'... In essence, we are the same. Though the ages and circumstances were vastly different, the emotions and psychological effects on us are not. I am not happy that they happened, but I am glad I have finally found someone who sees and understands. If I could go back in time and stop Him from hurting you, I would in an instant. But as it is, I am infinitely glad I am not alone anymore. Thank you for always seeing me when I leave. You saved me, even if you don't know it. I ameternally grateful. I know I see you leave at least some of the time...have I ever not seen? I do my best, but I know I'm not the most observant person around. Have I ever missed it?

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Donielle Smith 22 January 2010

Hi, I enjoyed reading this emotional and amazing poem. I can really relate to it. keep writing! Donielle

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