Saturday, October 10, 2009

Forbiden Daydreams Comments

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Late at night she feels down
She thinks of the one that can lift her frown
he remains clueless to the joy he can bring
just if he says hi makes her want to sing.
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Wendelin Weird
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Kikinaru 06 May 2010

Wow, that poem speaks to me. It sounds really powerful. (Dana Adair, just using her alias)

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Lynn Glover 01 May 2010

A beautiful daydream and maybe it will come true. Keep on writing and you will eventually see that all daydreams do not end in goodbyes. I like this poem, Lynn.

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