Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Forbidden Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

A gathering cloud
thick with desire
is checked by the blaze of the tallying sun.
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Kebe Iwara
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Adeline Foster 30 April 2013

-the heart is heavy without vent- great thought. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline

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Captain Cur 05 July 2012

Concise clear message, with a punch. Great poem!

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Saadat Tahir 05 July 2012

beautiful poem..... ya those eyes cant afford to have a fuzzy image.... :) loved it short sharp and focused. ; oved it :)

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