Saturday, December 9, 2023

Forbidden Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

A love so true in the depths of my heart,  
but I dare not express it because I feel unworthy of you.
A love that burns, unwavering and powerful,  
but the words remain unsaid, held within for so long.
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Anitha Vijayakumar
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Koffi B Sossou 31 December 2024

Love is blind. People you love do not necessarily see that you love them.

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Anitha Vijayakumar 07 January 2025

It's heartbreaking when our deep love goes unrecognized.

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Koffi B Sossou 31 December 2024

This poem goes straight to my heart. it is a masterpiece. Love it

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Good substantive expressions. Enjoyed reading. Top score

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Sonya Davis 26 December 2023

Especially liked the last four lines.

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Anjandev Roy 26 December 2023

This is simply brilliant..... thanks for sharing....

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Bharati Nayak 26 December 2023

The poem speaks volumes about silent love!

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