Forbidden Love... Comments

Always go with what you feel, get near your love, and many kisses steal! Very nice poem! Love Cosmic Dreamer name too

Just now I've read your beautiful poem and liked it very much. The title and the first two lines are eye catching. 'I know that I am falling, More and more each day. For you i'll keep on hoping, That one day we'll find a way...' - I love this optimistic note. Very positive and inspiring. 'I think you know within you, That you have won my heart. I hope that you shall love me, And we shall never be apart...' - Well said, may it be so! The poem deserves a rating of 10/10, which I happily give.

I think you know within you, fine expression.