Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Forbidden Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

I think of you all day long
But I know I shouldn’t
I think of you all the time
But I know I shouldn’t
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Tessa Monaghan
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Chantel Weston 22 January 2009

did you write this after winter formal last year? good job and i totaly know how that feels! ! ~SS

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Rashidah Rahman 21 January 2009

i wished you dont repeat forbidden and love so much.Its like repeating the message over and over again but was put differently each stanza.Instead of repeating it, why nt work on making the message more clear? Just a suggestion, dats all.

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