I was training in hell when I heard the sound
A voice, her voice, my heart was bound
Love between a demon and a human is forbidden
So I'll be in the shadows completely hidden
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this was amazing gd one i luv it its sound so scardely n koool 10+
ah... forbidden love... i know of it.... i loved a demon once... and he cursed me so i can never love again... nicely done...
wow...LOVE IT! ! ! its so full of the VERY deep, emotional view of love at first sight. i think this is one of the best poems ive read in a while! !
you were using the darkness from your soul to show the lightness of love. even forbidden love. great poem.