Forbidden Love Comments

what a twist to the tale! ! its a good poem...im jus giggling to myself cuz its a man...writing about lesbians lol. im immature lol, but it is a totally amazing poem, the imagery's proper good! ! plus i have a gay friend who was totally confused about hsi feelings, n was so ashamed of himself. plus, well done for being brave enough to write about a controversial topic!

An unusual ending there, Stephen, the 'her'. But it takes all kinds of love to make the world go round. Good write. Love Ernestine

This is very good, Stephen. You show a lot of promise and I hope you keep writing. Best wishes and warmest regards, CJ

It's my favourite poem of yours. It's hard to me to express what I feel after reading it because of the language barrier but you can be sure, I will read it many times yet. It's so full of emotions and so real! Also, the finish is surprising...

Very honest, ironic piece, well done you've got something special. Carolyn

I think this is wonderful Stephen. You've described an all-to-common thing that happens. Very well done especially considering you are male. great job. Sincerely, Mary

Hello Stephen, You write well rounded prose, especially for one so young. 8 from me. Smiling Tai