Forbidden Love Comments
Wandering the fissures of my mind
He observes what other have missed
Pain, sadness, hurt and loneliness
Sharing it in part with his own tender heart
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an exploration of many levels - moving - excellent twist of an ending
Brilliant! absolute brilliant. well penned and so touching. keep the good work moving........
A surprise ending too! After the usual great insight into human, er, affairs? Keep on typing girl.
o God! How realistic you are! We are in the same boat of thoughts. Shanmugam Chettiar
Same time next week - came in as a surprise. Beautifully scribed. Best wishes Fay Slimm Corwall U.K.
Most profound. The ending was quite a surpise. Really enjoyed reading this. HG: -) xx
If I understand this poem, and I think I do. It is a common thing that happens every day. I often wonder what is inside the mind of women. This is a portal. Dare we all look through? GW62
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