Forbidden Love Comments

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Trace skye. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

Love this, I think if each statement was given a full stop rather than a comma it would make each one stronger. Give him time to say it with impact rather than in one flow. I want you, I need you, I love you he says,

I soften to his words as he moulds me to his needs. falling into what we should not do can be very serious and bring serious consequences........ thank u dear poetess. tony

I cannot sum up my feelings about this poem other than saying...You spoke my language Trace. Thanks a lot.