Thursday, December 17, 2015

Forbidden Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Swallowed in thought,
she didn't notice him walk up to her.
A figure stood in front of her.
Before she could look up, he spoke.
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Pen Anthony
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Earnest Gatuma 02 November 2016

DOPE staff man...You've got the right words to parlance feelings.Good work Anthony...

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 December 2015

Which are the forms love too loves Is it compassion, tell me by jove, Are pity and sympathy your own forms Tell me if love follows any norms? 4 lines of a poem reproduced to show the unpredictability of this God gifted emotion called love. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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