Sunday, February 25, 2018

Forbidden Honey Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dictating monarch,
a queen in the beehive
just passing orders to the obedient passionless slaves
as there was none to disobey her
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Valsa George 06 March 2018

An all comprehensive poem touching the various aspects of life an death where your imagination takes majestic flight! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 February 2018

A lovely poem! I would just cite two key lines of this fabulous piece of poetry: Let me sleep in a content peace/ let me know what happens after I sleep......Excellent! Thanks dear sir for sharing! (10)

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 February 2018

A great metaphor, old wine in a new bottle.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 February 2018

A masterpiece. A poem that could withstand the tests of time. One of the most imaginative poems I have ever read. Beautifully crafted and well executed.10

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Nudershada Cabanes 25 February 2018

A splendid poem Sir Akhtar. Very imaginative.10

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