Forbidden Fruits Comments

Fairy tales and metaphors Forbidding are religious dogma The sorrowful felt 'Apple', of which no serpent will tempt tease, rather- Love and life procreation, hath no rules Amantes - Lover's consensual, delight Do they passion, of distinction 'Between beauty and obscenity? ' (Another version. I dare to share-) Eros Prose Thoughts begin feelings of sin within flesh and bones Festering moralists infecting clones Energies driven Power of love Paths to warmth... between pillars upholding our very being Ecstasy awaits! penetrations, sensations revelations 'Seeds of Life' within a nesting egg Orgasmic creations 'Universal Displays' Louie Levy

lovely lovely! ! loved reading this poem

I truly resonate with this one - - - this has wisdom hiding in the final verses which speaks of the effects from forbidden fruits - which in these so-called enlightened days are disregarded - - thank you for pointing this out to the reader Sathya, , , , and keep writing. I loved the flow of this piece......10 from Fay.

Powerful words, Sathya. When did everything become so distorted? Is nothing sacred anymore? Some things are best appreciated privately or the magic is lost. Linda

true so true, a very good write with strong use of metaphor bhayya, thanks for sharing 10++++ rgds asif

we all were born with sin...maybe thats why the human heart is attracted to the forbidden...

Again a great piece Bhayya... This time I fully agree to what you are saying here... Very well-penned indeed... Why human form is always inclined to forbidden things...? Is this an innate curiosity or obsessive compulsive nature of us...? I don't know but I know you have written a great poem here... Thanks for sharing... Regards, Kamran

Sathya, All the same until then has not died aspirations to this forbidden fruit... 10......... Best wishes, Tsira

i like this one alot its a mind puzzler nice images, and well chosen words.

hmmmmmm deep thought provoking one.....good write sir...

gone is the distinction between beauty and obscenity... what with pelvic gyrations dubbed as dance and moaning is enjoyed as music!