Thursday, November 12, 2015

Forbidden Fruits Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hide behind a tree, giggling as you chase me
A small dark fruit shifts from one hand to the other as I wait in anticipation for you to find me
You playfully scare me out of my hiding spot, your breath condensing in the air as you laugh and wrap me in your arms
I snuggle deep into you chest, my cold little hands nestled between the two of us, slowly getting warmer
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Cherie Mort
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 January 2016

You smile and take the plum out of my hands 'The new forbidden fruit of Eden', you say, and take a bite I smile and do the same We kiss and walk away, hand in hand- - - what a wonderful imagery. you are full of passion and love. liked your poem very very much. thank you. tony

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 12 November 2015

Beautifully crafted poem An excellent write...10

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