Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Forbidden Fruit Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to sleep if this is a dream
I want to lay beside you
Watch you awaken
I want you to kiss my eyes shut
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Leila Kay
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Marvin Brato 18 June 2008

Everyone has desire to love and be love back.... in dreams and much more in reality! A 10.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 April 2007

To dream of sweet love, but wait life is a dream when your in love... andy x

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 April 2007

another great and beautiful one.. great writer you are, , great one whom knows how to express her feelings through words.. come leila.. and and make your dream become as a real.. come and make your reality, , come waiting for you.. done well leila.. hazem

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Sajid Mirza 30 March 2007

Beautiful Poem. Very nice! ! ;)

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Jerry Hughes 22 March 2007

...I don't know who you've dedicated this to Leila, but he, I'm presuming he's a he, is a very lucky man.

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