Tuesday, August 27, 2019

Forbidden Fruit Comments

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Once they tasted forbidden fruit
They couldn't live without it
Or stop talking about it.
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Practicing Poetess
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Aqua Flower 02 September 2019

Addiction is a vicious cycle. It will bring you down down down. A good write on how the forbidden fruit will swallow you up and lead you to a premature death! Nicely done Practicing Poetess.

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Practicing Poetess 02 September 2019

Thanks, Aqua, as always! You should read my 'Dancing the Night Away.' More our style, my fellow connoisseur of all things romantic! : -)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 August 2019

A wonderful, insightful and perceptive write. A stern warning against addiction. May this poem, will in one way or another, prevent the same. Very well written and onto my Poem List.

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Practicing Poetess 28 August 2019

Thank you, Rose Marie. Your opinion is valued! : -)

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Sandra Feldman 27 August 2019

Such good, ad vice. Yes, addictions kill You've put it In such a way That those that Read it, May stay away Thanks to your good Advice, And Poetic skills. Well done!

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Practicing Poetess 27 August 2019

Thanks, Sandra. That was my intent- - a poem with a warning message. This was a very hard poem for me to write. I lost my baby brother due to drugs and his excessive alcoholism. He was the youngest sibling in my family, and he went before any of the rest of us.

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Sandra Feldman 27 August 2019

I'm so sorry to hear that. Yes, it must have been very, very difficult for you to write! I salute your courage and your valiant warning to others. Only the brave and good of heart can be so generous.. I admire your courage and your caring heart, very sincerely.

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Practicing Poetess 27 August 2019

Sandra, we are so lucky that we write poetry. That's a beneficial and acceptable addiction! :)

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Sandra Feldman 27 August 2019

You're so right! Some may laugh and not believe, but poetry is a great blessing to us and not in disguise. You are blessed too! I sincerely mean it.

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