Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Forbidden Fruit Comments

Rating: 4.8

He presses it to his lips,
Bares his teeth,
And nips at the flesh.
Sweet liquid escapes his lips
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Ruby Honeytip
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Ray Quesada 03 January 2013

This reminds me of Neruda. well done Ruby!

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Stevie Taite 24 November 2012

Very clever! My mouth is actually watering! And not for mango!

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Eindaray Kyaw 18 October 2012

Beautifully hot poem in a clever way....I enjoy this!

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