Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Forbidden Fruit Comments

Rating: 5.0

He counts the Yes
in her No's
with a teasing smile
and choose their trajectory
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Pankajam Kottarath
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Pheko Motaung 08 May 2012

A fantastic fabulous poem! One for all seasons! AA heart warming read.You brilliant

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Dave Walker 28 April 2012

A really great poem, like it.

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Neela Nath Das 27 April 2012

Disobedience of moral laws brings doom.It seems, I'm reading the first line of Milton's Paradise Lost___Of man's first disobedience and the fruit of that...........Nice write.

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