Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Forbidden Fruit Comments

Rating: 4.3

electrifying sparks that dance across my skin
the flutter of unknown attaching to my heart
the wheels are turning and pulling tiny strings
that seem to keep me on my toes
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Kellyn, A Grau
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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