Friday, January 9, 2009

Forbidden Fruit Comments

Rating: 5.0

My sorrow Is too grand
My taste buds are so bland
My stomach Is a mess
My heart Is broken I guess
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Gil Valiente
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Sreelekha Premjit 14 January 2009

Your title is so appropriate... isn't compromise another name for life....Nicely written..tnx for sharing..Tnx for your comment on my poem.

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