Forbidden Fruit Comments

You might check your spelling of 'pursuit' on line 2. No offense meant. It just throws off the reader and detracts from the poem.

make sense. rhymes... what more can i ask?

a nice concept.....a deep thoughts and well expressed infatuation...great rhyming.. Ency Bearis

love is un touchable i turned my my back on it when it turned its back to me it will burn u tear u apart a wise man would let go and pray to not be hurt

i absolutely, love this poem. Great job. thank you, kayla

I love the imagry portrayed in this poem. You truly painted a picture with words. Great job! Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth

My, My Sir Alex! Great poem for such a young man. But your feelings at this age, if I can remember back that far are very strong. Good time to write poetry I think. Give you a ten on this one. God Bless, Linda Across the sea

beautiful.....i am out of words! ! ! ! ....thios is supposed to go to the top list....a really good poem! !