Forbidden Desire Comments

bravo, bravo the whole poem is extremely beautiful but the last stanza is superb...i loved it Seema ji and it goes to my fav,10++++++++++++ and A++++++++++++ for this marvellous write...thanks rgds asif

'twisted ecstasy' 'shade of a thicket' 'Discharging a current' 'striking again and again' blush blush blush! ! superb! great allegorical eloquence seema! 10++++

Seema----a forbidden desire---discharging a current? ? ? ? ? electrifying poem ++++++++10 anjali

Something unpleasant caught in between.............desired love becomes forbidden.Excellent Seema.

Soon the clouds of forbidden desire Clustered on my lonely skies Discharging a current of Your intense thoughts That kept striking again and again………. To write such lines so subtly and yet so arrestingly, so much calibre is required and that caliber you possess to my delight. it is my fortune that i got to read your lines. your vocabulary gannery is so vast that you use them in apt places. i marvel st you.