Tuesday, January 5, 2010

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Feelings of love the mind forbids,
Falling for a man taken with kids.
First man it was easy to open up to,
Capable of feeling this feeling again who knew!
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Coreena Dejesus
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Your Thoughts 05 January 2010

Ok this was good but can people stop writing about love. WRITE ABOUT A DIFFERENT SUBJECT TO CHALLENGE YOURSELF

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Romeo Della Valle 05 January 2010

Wow, Correna, you really blew my mind, what a wonderful poem, I am really petrified, so much feeling behind a woman, wow, you really made it an impact on me...God Bless You! I imagine that these are things not coming from your maybe barren lips, but from the bottom of your heart, well penned, keep it up! Your are in the right site and track! God Bless You! 10+++

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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