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Nice flow cute poem

Your Poem very much affects the reader. Parting is such sweet sorrow; Nobody likes to part from sum 1 close. Great write from the heart 10+++

A very fine poem indeed. The eyes are very expressive of our emotions. You have used that imagery very proficiently. This is a touching poem written from the heart. Thanks. A 10.. Richard

.......................................questionably well written

This one hits close to home. Very well written. Hugs, Dee

Jazlle I think all we poets have a sad time when we part from another. Writing is a great way to help us come to terms with our grief. Very well written. Karin Anderson

A very moving poem which made me weep.

I've just written a poem called 'Saying Goodbye to Good Friends'...never an easy thing to do. Hugs, Dee

Lovely piece. Very sad.

Lovely piece. Very sad.

i can see a repetition to reach a perfection......great

Beautifully written, Though on the surface the subject seems to be romantic love, I think it applies to partings of every kind. I think all of us have had occasions where movement in different directions to the good.

A passionate expression........of........love denied!

sob... I know how you feel! That was a lovely... sad... but lovely piece X