Monday, February 2, 2009

For You Who Grieve Tonight Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day was long, the night will be endless
Emotionally spent the tears won't come
Its just the heart that continues to beat
The soul has nothing more to eat
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Rani Turton
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Vaibhav Pandey 13 February 2009

very touching poem ma'm.....i loved it.

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Fiona Davidson 05 February 2009

This is such a beautiful poignant write Rani....thank you...10++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 February 2009

Speak of life and death, the details Of what lies between birth and extinction Rationality irks, cannot comfort the loss Highflown theories until complete cessation..................that speaks of introspection by the living! where do we stand, grief ceases the mirth, are we all human or homosapiens, Darwin forgot to find all today`s distinctions, great write of humanity by imagery,10+++++++, thanks for sharing

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Tom Balch 03 February 2009

Rani, A brilliant well crafted and heart felt piece,10+++++ regards Tom

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Tsira Goge 02 February 2009

Very clever, wise and pleasant poems... Time - is good the doctor... 10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Joseph Poewhit 02 February 2009

Life is full of a roller coaster of emotions.

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Sandra Fowler 02 February 2009

We should all touch souls with those who grieve. Only God knows how many tears have been shed since this world began. Very moving, Rani. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Kris Smith 02 February 2009

Beautiful write Rani there is a good sense of relief and hope in your words thanks Chris 10 +++

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