We shall never forget
When whole world was let
To know the facts about human disaster
Meanwhile the dead bodies moved faster
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Herojit Philem We are unsure of tomorrow about an hour ago via mobile · Like · 2
Jen Walls Mr. Mehta, I would very much like to admire you again for taking on such a terrible global calamity (9/11) . I would very much like to send you extensive edits that I would like to suggest to make this poem sparkle to the English speaking reader. Do you have chat available? If so, would you please turn it on. I will cut and paste it into chat or if you rather prefer e-mail send me a personal message and let me know how it is best to receive. Otherwise, I can cut and paste it a response directly on this page? Please let me know your preference...I promise not to do this with every one of your poems...but I felt the spiritual importance of your intent here! Thank you! about an hour ago · Like · 2
Juan Trevino26 minutes ago Very powerful message. Well written and descriptive of a terrible event that the rest of the world may be unfamiliar with. Comment +1 okay
Life has its value Kalai Selvi19 minutes ago Growing insecurity in the world we live triggers violence during frustrated moments. Senseless killing can end lives in seconds but the pain will exist for more days to come. Comment 0 great work
Cyndile20 minutes ago good job Comment 0 Powerful message
Powerful message Juan Trevino3 minutes ago Very powerful message. Well written and descriptive of a terrible event that the rest of the world may be unfamiliar with. Comment +1 okay
Angela Wright5 minutes ago the poem had good flow for most of it..overall poem was good
Margaret Gudkov Your poem is grim sad and full of sentiment for dead souls who perished as a American and New Yorker i really appreciate this.. however you say there no witnesses..there plenty many people saw how others jumped from 100 floor to death cause they knew was no alternative there witnesses are firefighters and cops who risque their life for others many saved and also many died i still remember that day time stood still i was in brooklyn i never made to Manhattan i had appointment right across.. the panic the ashes flying all over the smell i came home i walked very long distance covered all with ashes we really thought war started about an hour ago · Like · 2