Friday, October 24, 2014

For You, Shall Never I Be Old Comments

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For you, shall never I be old,
Never shall my eyes stop to see
For shall I love you and you, me,
Even if to you, my life is sold.
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2014

A nice devotional poem. If one can write such poems while one has entered in one; s teens the one is promising to become a great poet in future.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 24 October 2014

Yes you should never be old for love and love for God. Let the age cross but let me be with you forever. Excellent piece of work shared on desk.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 October 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 October 2014

Beautifully crafted with a supplication like give ear to my prayer, O God; and hide not thyself from my supplication......Saheb.....it's a wonderful piece

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