Sunday, September 9, 2007

For You Are Green Comments

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For you are green, my love,
like trees in springtime, out come your buds
and soon the leaves and blossoms. Some smell sweet
and others far too far above our heads to know
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Linda Hepner
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Joseph Daly 10 September 2007

I like this Linda. It has a lovely and flowing narrative and the manner in which you put it is great. The usre of the occasional rhyme is well suited. It does give a feeling of deep pleasure when read.

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I find this beautiful. Passive, content, tolerant, patient. I wish I had such a quality. the pace is in perfect rhythm with the content. Lovely. t x

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Sean North 09 September 2007

ummmmmmmmmmmmm nice

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