Monday, November 3, 2014

For You Are Dead Now... Comments

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For you are dead now,
Seems my life a barren, old field,
With no joy and none to shield,
There's no reason I live; I show.
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Neela Nath Das 04 November 2014

A fabulous poem of loss and separation.Each and every word expressed here the grief of a true friend.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 November 2014

Nice sonnet on the loss of a friend scripted beautifully with touching words and rhyme.......indeed well expressed with a touch of divinity.........full marks

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 November 2014

Excellent description about seasons and human life. I do believe yet I hope he maligns. Beautifully presented. Nice job on sharing.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2014

A poem a tribute to the departed friend may his soul rest in peace

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Saheb Mohapatra

Saheb Mohapatra

Odisha, India
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