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Just amazing! The whole poem has a special aura! Some of the lines I like best.... may I reiterate! I rise and shuffle to my balcony To re-confirm the filtering horizon And remember how the distant hill Would re-emerge in tentative outline, Enacting Change and Permanence at once. Yes, Change and permananence enacted by the distant hill blurred by the morning mist and later cleared by the rising sun..... lovely image! All our tomorrows will be delusive and vain Unless we wake up certain that we live In the tense we call ‘present continuous’......... Can this immutable truth be put in a better way! This deserves well over 10! ! !