Monday, June 29, 2009

For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

no let ups, incessant, maddening
this unpredictable phase, popping up, changing, fading
havent i been here long enough in your fool's masquerade
wore each and all of your mask in this labyrinth ball, but for whom
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Jazib Kamalvi 12 May 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Comatose. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

The handing over of the innerself is well narrated in this poem with some beautiful lines that are very well deified in this poem.....10/10

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beautifully expressed...well done

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